Ravenpaw | WaterClan

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.x.name.x. - Ravenpaw [crest]

.x.gender.x. - tom

.x.rank.x. - apprentice

.x.age.x. - six moons

.x.clan.x. - WaterClan

.x.quick description.x. - large black tom with yellow eyes.


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Ravenpaw is a large, muscled young tom. His build is large and powerful, for his father, Eagleclaw's genes run through him. He is almost the mirror image of his dad, large, powerful and sleek. His paws are a little too big for him, making him kind of gawky. They are broad and flat, providing grip and balance for him. His fur is short, sleek and well groomed every day. Ravenpaw's legs are long and powerful, providing him speed and strength for fighting. His ears are smaller, again adding to a gawky appearance, but this does not hinder his hearing one bit. His ears are kind of rounded, making him look almost panther-like. Long claws and sharp white teeth make Ravenpaw quite the fighter, and he sharpens them daily to keep them ready for use. He may be quite the fighter, but his hunting skills are not that refined yet. His large paws provide balance, but often are loud and create a klutzy nature for Ravenpaw when it comes to hunting. Ravenpaw's eyes are a bright golden yellow, like a liquid gold. His sight is very keen, enabling him to keep an eye on his opponent, no matter how fast his opponent is.

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Ravenpaw is a very prideful cat, boastful when it comes to fighting. His skills as a fighter are refined and hard to come by, his power and speed matched by few cats at his age. He is very powerful, though desires no special place in his clan such as deputy or leader. His dreams consist of becoming the best warrior he can be to his Clan. His pride is a big issue, and his sisters work hard to keep him humble, especially Frostpaw. When is ego is deflated, he tends to sulk and mutter, making him a very amusing subject at the point of deflation. Though he is very prideful, he does his best to defend his Clan.

Though he is a very skilled and powerful fighter, Ravenpaw is not so skillful at hunting. He is gawky on his paws and awkward when he tries to stalk. He is a very keen listener and fast learner, but hunting just doesn't come naturally to him like it did his father. Ravenpaw is a very compassionate cat outside of the battlefield, and very defensive of his blind sister, Frostpaw. He believes she can do just as much if not more for WaterClan than any other cat. He is a loving brother and friend, willing to give his life for any member of WaterClan.

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Ravenpaw was born to Eagleclaw and Winterleaf, both of ThunderClan. Winterleaf lied to Smokefur, telling him that Ravenpaw was his, though the proof was undeniable that he was the son of Eagleclaw. He looks exactly like him for StarClan's sake! Ravenpaw was born in ThunderClan with his two sisters, Featherkit and Frostkit [Smokefur's kits], but was passed off to Smokefur to be raised in RiverClan. Eagleclaw was dead by that time. Eagleclaw was a bold warrior of ThunderClan, powerful and a skilled fighter and hunter. He fell in love with Winterleaf, and he still watches over her in her dreams. Eagleclaw died in a great flood that swept through the clans many moons before Ravenpaw was born. Eagleclaw sparingly visits his son's dreams as well.

When Ravenpaw was born, Winterleaf was in shock. She was pregnant with Smokefur's kits only a week later, and panicked. She didn't know how to react if Smokefur questioned the kit's father. She lied, saying Ravenpaw was his. Ravenpaw even grew up thinking Smokefur was his father. Winterleaf didn't want to deal with kits in FireClan, especially if they belonged to WaterClan's deputy. Her Clan would despise her even more since she wasn't even born in FireClan. She loved Smokefur and thought he might enjoy watching his kits grow up. With Ravenpaw it was different though. Smokefur must've guessed Ravenpaw wasn't his son, he acted too much like Eagleclaw and looked like him too. Ravenpaw had to prove himself to not only his clan, but his father now too. Smokefur soon came to love Ravenpaw just as if he were his own.

A few moons later, Smokefur died of blackcough. Ravenpaw was devastated, as were his sisters. They had loved him so much, and now their father was gone. Together, though, they strive mightily and will not let each other lose hope. As is the bond thy now share.

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